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Description

Photograph of my 1 1/2 year old daughter.
I can only do my best and hope for the best for her.
Image size
902x660px 334.6 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D50
Shutter Speed
10/800 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
55 mm
Date Taken
Aug 14, 2009, 10:46:15 AM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

She is so beautiful, Q!
I can't wait to see her again!
So I kinda feel I, although I've been honest, have had less than positive things to say in my critiques of your work lately. I have meant everything in the best faith and commented in hopes of helping. Ok...to the critique......
Negative:
Her eyes need to be sharper. So their innocence bores into us.
If the sharp focus was on her eyes and lips as well as the hair...it would be perfection for me...
This is a wonderful piece. Her skin is silk woven into peach fuzz. The channel mixing is excquisite. The warm colours and her manners tells us she is loved. She is comfortable and questing and her eyes are deep.
The soft focus around her and the sharp of her hair...amazing.
The line of the table bisecting her head is nicely placed. The curvature of the table and chair that frames her is excellent. Did you choose it, or was it a happy accident?
Is the light on the left half of her face painted?
The way the light bisects her face, highlight beauty and brighter an even higher beauty. Those eyes. You can fall into them. They are so full! This is such a gentle picture. So intimate. A wonderful moment. She is lucky to have you as a father. This would make an excellent drawing - vector? Great work, my friend.